KarMel Scholarship 2007

 

Honorable Mention:

Best Poem

“Paddling Backwards”

By Maisha Foster-O’Neal - OR

 

 

Desciption of Submission: “Sometimes the only way to move yourself forward is to start by writing everything backwards, by reliving your past on paper.  This is a fictional poem-story.” - Maisha

 

Why Karen and Melody Liked It:  We loved the concept of the poem of writing everything backwards from present to past.

 

 

 

He spins backwards,

words unraveling as he’s

paddling through memory’s

eddying waters,

the pen his ship that he

steers through the past—

it’s time to illuminate the truth and ruminate.

His hands shake.

The river empties into a lake and he’ll take

to the shores and give himself to the stars

snatched by the wind and flung

to the city windows where they glitter

and decay.

 

He’s sixteen and he plays the bass,

chases his nightmares and reigns them in

—but he doesn’t like to get wet.

“Let me go. Let me go,” he screams;

the golden beasts don’t belong in this dream.

But they’re strong and he’s wrong,

they rip his books from his hands and

rip his secrets till he can’t stand; he’s

curled on the ground; “Faggot! Faggot!”

the golden ones shout,

like it’s a bout of the flu and it’s

catching.

 

He patches his soul

and his pen scratches on the paper.

 

He’s fourteen and he wants to learn the guitar so he can

write his nightmares to music

and be a star.

“You’ll go far” he’s told; “be brave, be bold.”

He staves off caution and whispers his secret

—He’s shunned.

The golden beasts run to the site

of the fight

so he spites them all and changes from guitar

to bass.

 

Lines chase his pen across the paper.

 

He’s twelve and he asks his mom

“When are feelings wrong?”

 

His ink is smearing behind the liquid curtain

shielding his eyes from the outside.

 

He’s ten with a new bike and tickets to

a baseball game.

He’s learning to tame his face and keep up

the pace. His dad calls him Ace even though

he knows he’s Jack, and in three years

the golden beasts across the street

will call him Queen.

 

The pen slips and he lets the river

carry him deeper.

 

He’s eight and he states that he’s

a big boy now:

No more toy cars, it’s time to look to the

stars

because when he’s grown up he’ll fly away

in a pirate ship

to ever never foreverland.

 

The ink trails his pen like a game of

follow the leader but he’s not a wide-eyed

dreamer any more.

 

Now he’s six. He can count to ninety-nine

but mixes up sixty and seventy.

He likes tea parties and dolls,

but don’t tell Paul or Holden,

the golden boys who live across the street.

Don’t give them a reason to tease him

with the name Jackie-girl.

 

The memories swirl by and his

pen leaks his words.

 

He’s four and he likes to color but

it’s hard to stay inside the lines.

At night the hall light helps to keep

the monsters where they belong.



The pen glides along;

the ride is almost at its end.

 

He’s two:

two fingers and ten toes and a nose.

He chose Elmo as his hero;

he’s never heard the word queer or homo

but he knows Elmo isn’t a girl or a boy.

 

The paper curls as it burns and the river

churns below the rotting stars and the

reigning dreams have begun to snow.

 

He thinks as he steps onto the shores:

The golden ones don’t know

that within each diamond star is a rainbow

that glows

and though its shell may crumble away

the imprismed light will never decay.

 

 

 

 

 

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