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Melody's Favorite
"I Hate It"
(poem)
By Sara Fincham - West Virginia
Melody's Favorites
"Liberation"
(artwork)
By Joanna Barnum - New York
Melody's Favorites
"Metamorphosis"
(poem)
By Anthony Lucas - Pennyslvania
There's something about your first
That keeps you clinging on
You live in the past
Even when they're gone
You said you wanted love
And we made it
You said it was special
And you'd save it
You said you loved me
And no one could change it
But you didn't even fight
And I hate it
It was fine between you and me
And then we let it out
Our secret wasn't accepted
I'd never heard you shout
Your mom wanted you to be normal
You tried to be
She told you to love whoever you want
As long as it wasn't me
You said you wanted love
And we made it
You said it was special
And you'd save it
You said you loved me
And no one could change it
But you didn't even fight
And I hate it
Your mom and my mom
They formed an alliance
They couldn't keep us apart
I fought in defiance
You just stood there
Pleading sorryness with your tears
She forced you to marry
Do you think you'll learn to love him over the years
They saw us together
And how could he not know
You gave me one final hug
And you didn't wanna let go
You said you wanted love
And we made it
You said it was special
And you'd save it
You said you loved me
An no one could change it
But you didn't even  fight
And I hate it
Silent eyes whisper frozen words into ears illusions have teared.

A father, not a dad lefts his voice, as he has lifted his hands never to hold or to strike but makes puppets of nothing.

Dressed in the finest fasions and most scared suspicious, a voice was released, but words were not spoken.

A PULLING, PUSHING, BURGNING, TACKLE, of words and emotions fight to become known.  A sudden silence.

Silence.
Silence.
Silence.

Doors were flung open, skeletons released, and pink paint scattered and stained.

Walking arms became solid and stale, almost lifeless, and regretful.  His hands frozen.

The source of pain became sacrificed.  A few minutes of torture quickly became gratifying, all of this a by-product of divine intervention, a father challenged to be a dad.

A boy challenged to be a man.

An isolated well dressed suspicious boy becomes praise worthy.

His burden lifted.
His happiness on the tip of his lips.

His freedom rolls down the back of his throat,
his heart becomes numb,
and he smiles.

His words thrown up into fireworks.

A boy became a man.
2003 KarMel Scholarship Entry
"Liberation" - Joanna Barnum - NY
"I Hate It" - Sara Fincham - WV
"Metamorphosis - Anthony Lucas - PA